The charts give information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US Summerise the information about honey-bee colonies and honey production by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The first bar diagram illustrates the number of honey-bee
colonies
and the second bar chart presents the amount of the
production of honey in the USA between 1970 and 2010 with 10-Correct article usage
apply
year
intervals.
Overall
, it is clear that
the first year
is the most productive year
of
Change preposition
for
the
honey-bee manufacturing and the trend seems to decrease throughout the period. Correct article usage
apply
However
, in the second year
of the record, the volume of bee colonies
and honey production reversed.
To begin
with, the total of the US colonies
of one type of bees occupied 4 million
and slightly increased by 0.1 million
before dramatically dropping to 3.5 million
in 1990. A significant decrease was seen in 2000 to well over 2.5 million
and it overwhelmingly non-stop nosedived to approximately 1.8 million
in the year
2010.
Additionally
, the total honey production in America was at 130,000 tonnes
in 1970 and it noticeably went down by 20,000 tonnes
, reversed to the quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
colonies
that shot up. Furthermore
, it surged to 120,000 in 1990 and remarkably plummeted to 100,000 tonnes
in the next ten years. Lastly
, a slump was seen at the end
of the period and arrived at a nominal 70,000 tonnes
.Submitted by nnatthinee on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words colonies, year, million, tonnes with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
▼