The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The graph illustrates the figure for
visitors
travelling to a particular Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, the number of tourists who used three kinds of accommodation including cruise ships, islands and total increased over the period shown. Remarkably, the number of people staying on cruise ships was the highest.
Starting, in 2010, the figure for travellers using cruise ship residences on the Caribbean islands was 1 million
visitors
, then
, a gradual growth to about 2,7 million
visitors
in 2016 and leaked at 5,5 million
visitors
at the end
of the period.
Caribbean Island welcomed about 0,75 million
visitors
stayed on the island and remained until 2011. This
figure saw a significant rise to 1,5 million
visitors
in 2015, after that, it dropped to about 1,25 million
visitors
before backing up to 1,5 million
visitors
in 2017. The totals
climbed from about 2,5 Fix the agreement mistake
total
million
visitors
in 2010 to 0,5 million
visitors
in 2011, finally
reaching 2 million
visitors
In 2017 after declining 0,25
Change preposition
by 0,25
million
visitors
in 2012.Submitted by writingeilts on
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