The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar graph illustrates data about international

sales

of the popular five mobile phone

brands

from 2009 to 2013 in the world market by

number

.

Overall

, it can be easily seen that Samsung and Nokia

brands

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brand

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sales

were top of the list in the given time. In the

beginning

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beginning,

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Nokia's

sales

were almost twice time

more

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much

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than

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as

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Samsuns's

sales

almost 450 and 220 respectively, but

it

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this

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changed

at the end

. It means that Samsung

brands

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brand's

brands'

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mobile phone

sales

significantly increased to 450

number

but Nokias' decreased to 250

number

.It is observed that

apple's

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Apple's

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sales

remarkablely

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remarkably

remarkable

rise

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rose

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to almost 100

number

in 2011 and it was followed by a

noticiable

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noticeable

growth to 150 in 2013. Unlike

the

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apply

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apple's

sales

,

preferness

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the preference

of LG

brands

drop

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dropped

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to 80

number

in 2012.

However

, The ZTE

brands

went up slightly and

regullarly

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regularly

between 2009 and 2013

although

it was the lowest

number

from 2011 to 2013.