The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates data about international
sales
of the popular five mobile phone brands from 2009 to 2013 in The World market by number
. Overall
, it can be easily seen that the Samsung and Nokia brands' sales
were top of the list in
the given time.
In the beginning the Nokia's Change preposition
at
sales
were almost twice time more
Replace the word
much
than
the Samsuns's Change preposition
as
sales
450 and 220 respectively, but this
situation changed at
the end. It means that Samsung Change preposition
in
brands
mobile phone Change noun form
brand's
brands'
sales
significantly increased to 450 number
but Nokia's decreased to 250 number
.It is observed that The
Apple's Correct article usage
apply
sales
remarkably rose to almost 100 number
in 2011 and it was followed by a noticiable
growth to 150 in 2013. Unlike Correct your spelling
noticeable
The
Apple's Correct article usage
apply
sales
, preferness
of the LG Correct your spelling
the preference
brand's
Change noun form
brand
drop
to 80 Wrong verb form
dropped
number
in 2012. However
, The ZTE brand's went up slightly and regullarly
between 2009 and 2013 Correct your spelling
regularly
although
it was the lowest number
from 2011 to 2013.Submitted by emiretatli7 on
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