The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates data about international
sales
of the popular five mobile phone brands from 2009 to 2013 in The World market by
number
.
Overall
, it can be easily seen that the Samsung and Nokia brands'
sales
were top of the list
in
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the given time. In the beginning the Nokia's
sales
were almost twice time
more
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than
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as
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the Samsuns's
sales
450 and 220 respectively, but
this
situation changed
at
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the end. It means that Samsung
brands
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brand's
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mobile phone
sales
significantly increased to 450
number
but Nokia's decreased to 250
number
.It is observed that
The
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Apple's
sales
remarkably rose to almost 100
number
in 2011 and it was followed by a
noticiable
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noticeable
growth to 150 in 2013. Unlike
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Apple's
sales
,
preferness
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the preference
of the LG
brand's
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drop
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to 80
number
in 2012.
However
, The ZTE brand's went up slightly and
regullarly
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regularly
between 2009 and 2013
although
it was the lowest
number
from 2011 to 2013.
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