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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
#consumption #fish #kinds #meat #european #country
The line graph compares how much
beef
, lamb,
chicken
 and fish was consumed in a European nation from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
,
chicken
consumption
 increased dramatically,
while
amount
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 of
beef
 and lamb which has eaten has experienced
fall
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a fall
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. In
additional
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addition
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, fish
consumption
 has
remain
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 steady.
To begin
, in 1979, the
amount
 of
chicken
consumption
 was under 150
gram
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grams
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 for
individual
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individuals
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 in a weak and it
has
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rose to 250
gram
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grams
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 approximately in 2004. In 1989,
amount
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the amount
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 of
chicken
 that was eaten was the same
amount
of
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as
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beef
consumption
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consumed
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 and
reach
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reached
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to
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apply
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200
gram
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grams
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. In
compare
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, fish
consumption
 remained stable, around 50
gram
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grams
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 during these 25 years. In 1979, the
amount
 of
beef
consumption
 stood at above 200
gram
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grams
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 per person per week
that
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apply
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this
 figure decreased
about
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by about
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 100
gram
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grams
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 in 2004.
Furthermore
, in terms of lamb
consumption
, there has been a steady decline from 150
gram
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grams
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 in 1976 to
nearby
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nearly
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 60
gram
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grams
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 in 2004.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words beef, chicken, consumption, amount, gram with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • fish
  • meat
  • poultry
  • beef
  • lamb
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • gradual
  • significant
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady
  • correlation
  • period
  • data
  • comparison
  • predominant
  • kilograms per capita
  • dietary habits
  • health consciousness
  • sustainability
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