The charts below give information on the consumption of water by agricultural products in Australia in 2014, and the share of income they produced.

The charts below give information on the consumption of water by agricultural products in Australia in 2014, and the share of income they produced.
The provided pie charts indicate data about the usage of
water
by agricultural harvests in
Australia
in 2014,and
also
the average
of
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wage
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they generated. A glance at the graph reveals that the highest
amount
of
water
consumpt
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consumption
for growing livestock and
fruit
in
Australia
in 2014.
However
,Rice used the least of
water
due to
plant
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plants
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.
In addition
,
Fruit
made the most
wage
production in
Australia
in that year. In 2014,just over
two thirds
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of
water
consumption
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to livestock(%36) in the nation
in
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2014.Whilst,the
amount
of money which agricultures in
Australia
made was a tiny fraction(%5).(Which was the
least
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average
of
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salary
between
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all harvests in 2014).
Moreover
,the
amount
of
water
which was provided for
Fruit
and Dairy was %21 and %19,respectively.As opposed to,36 per cent of money which was generated for
Fruit
and It was the highest
amount
of
wage
production over the whole period.
In contrast
,Sugar and Rice consisted of a quarter
water
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usage in
Australia
in 2014.
While
,
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the proportion of income production for Sugar and Rice was just under a third(%29) in the country in 2014.
Additionally
,the percentage of
water
usage was the same making
wage
,(%9) in
Australia
in 2014.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, australia, wage, amount, fruit with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • agricultural products
  • water-intensive
  • share of income
  • contribute
  • water-efficient
  • sustainable
  • management
  • water conservation
  • policies
  • regulations
  • discourage
  • innovative solutions
  • collaboration
  • challenges
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