In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Most parents teach their

children

that the

result

of their work is based on their performance. They hope their

children

can be successful in the future. I oppose

this

view with the arguments in the following paragraphs. I strongly believe the learning process is more important than the

result

. Some people think that anything can be achieved by hard work.

As a

result

, many

children

grow up with high motivation to achieve their dreams. Not only increasing their motivation

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but

also

the sense of competitiveness to others. With

this

fundamental, they can be more independent and not always rely on others.

For example

, people with

this

behavior

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get their first job quicker than others.

Besides

, there are disadvantages to having

this

kind of teaching. Many

children

are too focused on the

result

, not the art of learning. When the

result

is not as good as their expectations or making mistakes, they get low motivation and are depressed.

Furthermore

, they lost their vision to get back on track. To illustrate, most adults in Japan have killed themselves when they lost their jobs or can’t achieve their target. In conclusion, the teaching of hard work is good if can give a balance with low expectations. Most parents and schools should give a lesson on the importance of learning from mistakes. Making wrong decisions at a young age will make us stronger and more mature in the future.

As a

result

, people will be not fragile if they get bad achievements when they are adults.