The table below shows the proportions of pupils attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the proportions of pupils attending four secondary school

types between 2000 and 2009.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant
The table illustrates the percentage of learners taking part in four sort of secondary school within 9 years.
It is clear that
throughout the same time frame, community
schools
emerged as the main providers of secondary education,
while
specialist, grammar, and voluntary-controlled
schools
saw a decrease in student enrollment First off, from 2000 to 2009, the percentage of voluntary-controlled
schools
decreased from slightly over half to barely 20%
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Likewise
, during the same time frame, the proportion of kids attending grammar school just under 25% decreased by half. The comparatively small percentage of students attending specialized
schools
(12%)
also
decreased, yet not considerably.
On the other hand
, community
schools
had an increase in significance
while
the other three categories of
schools
saw a decrease.
Although
in 2000 just 12% of students received an education at these institutions, during the next nine years
this
number rose substantially to over half of all students.
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