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The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Presented for consideration is a line graph depicting the banana
price
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 in four nations from 1994 to 2004 which was measured in
dollars
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 per
kilogram
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.
Overall
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, it can be observed that
Japan
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 had the highest
price
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 over the time frame,
while
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 the USA was the lowest. It can
also
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 be observed that France's
price
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 stayed at the same
price
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at the end
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 of the period,
whereas
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 Germany saw a growth tendency. Take a closer look at
Japan
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 and the USA, it is evident that
Japan
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 had the largest
price
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 in 1996, which was 2
dollars
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 per
kilogram
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, increased steadily to 3
dollars
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 per
kilogram
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 in the next 2 years and fluctuated from 1999 to 2003, stood at 2.5
dollars
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 per
kilogram
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 in 2004.
Besides
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 that, the USA showed a begin at 1 dollar per
kilogram
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 grew slowly to around 1.3 in 1998 and slightly decreased to 1.2 in 2004. Turning to the remaining statistics,
it is clear that
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 France started at the same
price
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 as
Japan
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, which was 2
dollars
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 per
kilogram
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 in 1996, stayed remained for the next 2 years before took a drop in 1999, which was 1.5. France's
price
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 continued to rise back to 2
dollars
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 per
kilogram
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 and steadily fluctuated till the end. Regarding Germany which began at 1.5 and grew steadily to 2
dollars
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 per
kilogram
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 in 2002 and stopped at approximately 1.7 in 2004
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, dollars, kilogram, japan with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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