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The graph below shows the avarage audience size per performance at four Canadian theaters from 2000-2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reportingthe main featuresand make comparisons where relevent.

The graph below shows the avarage audience size per performance at four Canadian theaters from 2000-2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reportingthe main featuresand make comparisons where relevent.
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 size for each performance at Harpe's Theaters, New Stages, The Dragonfly, and Little BlackBox from 2000 to 2014 in Canada. The data reveals a clear relationship between time and the number of audience members. The number of audiences at The Dragonfly fell dramatically after they were first introduced in 2000,
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, it grew significantly from 90 in 2002 to 150 in 2007. By the year 2007, a peak of over 160 was reached. At New Atage, it
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 steadily increased from around 90 in 2000 to about 150 in 2006.
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 from
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 graph, the average size of the audience at Little Black Box has maintained at around 50 until 2014. At Harpe's Theater, It has always exceeded 200 and was on the verge of reaching 250 in 2010 and the numbers have remained stable for 14 years.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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