There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter: • describe what the problem with the changing rooms is • say what happened the last times you complained • explain what you want the manager to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in order to complain about the changing rooms in Sadaf Center. I am Mah Ka working out in

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gym on a regular basis. Since I started to work out in

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complex, the door of the changing room

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been broken.

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, most customers suffer from

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problem on a regular basis.

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I complained several times about

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problem to the staff, I could not receive a suitable answer. The

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time I complained about

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problem to your staff, the supervisor came and wrote the details about the door.

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, she promised to repair

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in a timely manner, but unfortunately, it has not been repaired yet. To rectify

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situation, I demand that you repair

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door.

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, in my idea, monitoring staff activities is essential to your complex. I suggest setting up a box for recommendations at the public hall. I hope

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matter will be dealt with you as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Mah Ka

kargar.mh1992Mon May 27 2024

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task achievement

While the response to the task prompt is comprehensive, adding a bit more detail on the impact of the problem on customers could bolster your task achievement score.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear and polite closing which aligns well with the formal tone required.

task achievement

Your writing tone is formal and appropriate for a letter to a manager, which strengthens the overall impression.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

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Complete response

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Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

170 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

frequent user
specific issues
cleanliness
hygiene
broken facilities
lack of supplies
address the issue
response
emphasize
well-maintained
comfort
hygiene
politely
firmly
request
resolve
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