There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter: • describe what the problem with the changing rooms is • say what happened the last times you complained • explain what you want the manager to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in order to complain about the changing rooms in Sadaf Center. I am Mah Ka working out in
this
gym on a regular basis. Since I started to work out in Linking Words
this
complex, the door of the changing room Linking Words
have
been broken. Change the verb form
has
Therefore
, most customers suffer from Linking Words
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problem on a regular basis. Linking Words
Although
I complained several times about Linking Words
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problem to the staff, I could not receive a suitable answer.
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last
time I complained about Linking Words
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problem to your staff, the supervisor came and wrote the details about the door. Linking Words
Then
, she promised to repair Linking Words
this
in a timely manner, but unfortunately, it has not been repaired yet.
To rectify Linking Words
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situation, I demand that you repair Linking Words
this
door. Linking Words
In addition
, in my idea, monitoring staff activities is essential to your complex. I suggest setting up a box for recommendations at the public hall.
I hope Linking Words
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matter will be dealt with you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Mah KaLinking Words
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