Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others think that the circumstances of a crime, and the reason for committing it should be considered when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There are some

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about how a criminal should

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. Some people claim that fixed

punishment

should

consider

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be considered

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for

crimes

,

while

others believe that, we should have flexible

punishment

according to

the conditions and reasons for committing

crimes

. Personally, I think that we should notice all factors which are related to

crimes

.

This

essay will look into both ideas and

finally

outline my opinion. On the one hand, if governments consider the same

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for

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crime

, people feel that they are equal with each other in

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society

and there is no discrimination.

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, the rules of paying

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taxes

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are

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for all and if a doctor

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not pay

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, he should be punished as same as ordinary people.

Furthermore

, in

this

case, governments should not allocate financial resources and time for approving new laws for each criminal.

On the other hand

, considering unfixed

punishment

for each criminal in

flexible

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situation

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motive

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criminals to

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of do

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the crime

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crime

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again.

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bread should not

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same

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a car thief that circumstance could lead to more commit

crimes

.

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, if the

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the person who

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this

could

encouragement

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encourage him

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to

left

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the

crime

and

he thrive

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to

being

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a useful person

for

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in

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society

when he witnesses

of

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equality in different classes of

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society

.

To sum up

, I think, maybe the same

punishment

for

same

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crime

could be more affordable but considering motivation and personality for committing a

crime

and

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punishing

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criminals in terms of how violation is harmful

for

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society

could be more effective.