The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summaraise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

Summaraise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The diagram below illustrates the procedure of electricity by applying geothermal energy.
Overall
, the process requires five steps before transferring electricity to the power plant, which are mainly divided into two sectors: underground working and upward ones. And the energy is generated by cold
water
combining stages of transformations.
To begin
with, to arrive at the Geothermal zone( area with hot rocks), cold
water
in the box needs to be pumped down underneath the ground all over through a 4.5km injection well. Afterwards, cold
water
will flow across hot rocks,
thus
, being heated. In the final stage underground, as the principle of
high temperature
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liquid goes upward, the heated
water
is able to be pumped, allowing the heated
water
to be pumped upward to the condenser through the production well. Regarding the second sector of the process, hot
water
is pumped up and transferred into steam. By step four, steam will cross a channel to meet the turbine, which rotates depending on the power of the steam.
At the end
of the fifth step, the production from the forehead goes through a generator in order to produce electricity.
Finally
, the energy will be sent to the power plant after five stages of execution.
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