The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture depicts how
bricks
are made for the construction industry.
Overall
, there are seven main steps in the process of brick manufacturing, beginning with the preparation of
clay
and ending with the delivery of the
bricks
to the customers. In the first stage of the process,
clay
is dug out of the ground by a digger to prepare for production, following which the
clay
is placed onto a metal grid and put through [đưa qua] a roller [bang truyền] which breaks it into small chunks. After that, the
clay
is mixed with [được trộn với] sand and water and the resulting mixture is either put in a mould or cut by a wire cutter to make well-shaped
bricks
. In the next stage of the process, the
bricks
are put in [be placed in] a drying oven for one or two days, after which the dried
bricks
are heated [được đun nóng] in a kiln, first at a moderate temperature [nhiệt độ vừa phải] (200 to 980 degrees),
then
at a high temperature up to 1300 degrees before being moved to a cooling chamber where they stored for 2 to 3 days in order for them to cool down and become hard. Once the fished
bricks
are packaged, they are delivered by trucks to storage facilities of building sites.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacture
  • brick(s)
  • building industry
  • digging
  • extraction
  • raw material
  • clay
  • mixing
  • moulding
  • wire cutting
  • drying oven
  • firing
  • kiln
  • high temperatures
  • hardening
  • cooling
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • traditional
  • modern
  • environmental considerations
  • sustainability practices
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