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The graph illustrates the impact of vaccinations on the incidence,

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child illness in Britain from 1940 to 1990.

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, the number of children having whooping cough in Britain during the beginning period of vaccination decreased

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the figure for vaccine uptake fluctuated. Remarkably, the highest number of offspring with whooping cough in Britain when they were being

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was in 1950 and

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figure for vaccine uptake was in 1990. Starting, in 1940, the rate of cases of whooping cough in the time of vaccination beginning period stood at 50

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, and peaked at about 170

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of cases in 1950, before plunging at 0

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in 1990. 

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, the proportion of vaccine uptake cases in 1970 was over 81%. After that,

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figure experienced a bottom at 30% before peaking at 94% in 1990.