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The graph illustrates the impact of vaccinations on the incidence,
a
child illness in Britain from 1940 to 1990.
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Overall
, the number of children having whooping cough in Britain during the beginning period of vaccination decreased Linking Words
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the figure for vaccine uptake fluctuated. Remarkably, the highest number of offspring with whooping cough in Britain when they were being Linking Words
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this
figure for vaccine uptake was in 1990.
Starting, in 1940, the rate of cases of whooping cough in the time of vaccination beginning period stood at 50 Linking Words
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of cases in 1950, before plunging at 0 Fix the agreement mistake
thousand
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in 1990.
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Additionally
, the proportion of vaccine uptake cases in 1970 was over 81%. After that, Linking Words
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figure experienced a bottom at 30% before peaking at 94% in 1990.Linking Words
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