The table below shows the number of students at a primary school and a secondary school in Malaysia in 2005. The chart show survey results of what these students favourite sport was.

The table below shows the number of students at a primary school and a secondary school in Malaysia in 2005. The chart show survey results of what these students favourite sport was.
The table chart illustrates how many Malaysian
students
were at primary and secondary
school
in 2005. Two pie charts depict the poll consequences of
students
’ tendency to sports.
Overall
, the most number of
students
come from secondary
school
.
Besides
, the vast majority of
students
in secondary
school
like
football
and basketball,
whereas
the favourite sports among
students
in primary
school
are
football
and tennis. As mentioned before, the total number of
students
is from the secondary
school
with 91,000 in comparison with the number of
students
in the primary
school
with 73,000.
According to
the pie charts, in the secondary
school
, two-fifths of the proportion is related to
football
,
following
this
, 35% of
students
like basketball in there. Tennis is the third favour of
students
with 15%,
while
in the primary
school
is the most popular field of sport with 40% proportion among other sports.
Football
with just under a third value placed in the second grade and basketball with 15% which is followed by. Rugby is the least popular sport in both schools with just 5%.
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