The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The
table
gives information about the different number
of houses cycling to work in many types of the Uk
which that one decade .
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UK
Overall
, the table
shown
percentages of houses in 12 different Wrong verb form
shows
area
of the Change to a plural noun
areas
Uk
it is that clear the highest Correct your spelling
UK
number
was in Inner London in 2011 in contrast
the lowest number
was in Gateshead in the year 2001.
First of all , in the first table
inner London was
houses cycling increased from 2001 to 2011 to reach the height Unnecessary verb
apply
number
in the table
it was upward to
144 % . The second area was Brighton and Hove there are surging above double rate to reach in 2011 109 per cent .the Change preposition
of
ares
from Manchester , Newcastle upon Tyne , Sheffield, Cardiff,Gateshead and Exeter those areas Correct your spelling
areas
were took
under 100 per cent and the Change the verb form
were taken
last
third areas in the table
were nuder
half percentage.Correct your spelling
under
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