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The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
table
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 gives information about the different
number
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 of houses cycling to work in many types of the
Uk
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UK
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 which that one decade .
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, the
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shown
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percentages of houses in 12 different
area
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 of the
Uk
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 it is that clear the highest
number
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 was in Inner London in 2011
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 the lowest
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 was in Gateshead in the year 2001. First of all , in the first
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 inner London
was
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houses cycling increased from 2001 to 2011 to reach the height
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 in the
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 it was upward
to
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 144 % . The second area was Brighton and Hove there are surging above double rate to reach in 2011 109 per cent .the
ares
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areas
 from Manchester , Newcastle upon Tyne , Sheffield, Cardiff,Gateshead and Exeter those areas
were took
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 under 100 per cent and the
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 third areas in the
table
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 were
nuder
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under
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 half percentage.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words table, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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