You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates differences in the amount and type of junk food used by Australian youngsters between 1975 and 2000.
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
there are three features of fast meals Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
pizza
, burgers and Use synonyms
chips
.
The food which had a significant drop was Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
, Use synonyms
while
other categories had only risen.
Linking Words
Firstly
, in 1975, Linking Words
pizza
and hamburgers had approximately equal results by 5, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
fish
was the top-ranked consumed snack with the number 100, Use synonyms
however
, in 1980, Linking Words
chips
and Use synonyms
fish
had a noticeable reduction to 84 and other types of fast food had a dramatic growth.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, in 1985, Linking Words
chips
went up slowly to 86 and hamburgers to 83, in the meantime, Use synonyms
pizza
had only 40. Despite Use synonyms
this
fact, Linking Words
pizza
overtook Use synonyms
fish
with 81, Use synonyms
whereas
Linking Words
chips
reduced to 45 ,in 1995. In 2000, hamburgers had a huge up to 100, Use synonyms
wheras
, Correct your spelling
whereas
fish
had 39 and Use synonyms
pizza
grew to 80.Use synonyms
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, chips, fish with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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