The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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of

visitors

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who visit a specific Caribbean island for 7 years.

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it is clear that

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the

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of tourists is on the rise as time passes. In the first years, more

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preferred to stay on the island during their vacation compared to ones who decided to stay on cruise ships but

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was not true in the

last

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years. The

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of people who remained on the island in 2010 and 2011 was exactly the same with

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around 750 thousand

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. There was a slight rise to about 1.5

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tourists from the year 2013 to 2015. In 2015,

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had a small decline and after that, it experienced an increase to again 1.5

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visitors

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. Between 2010 and 2013, the

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of

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who preferred staying on

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over the other option fluctuated around 500 thousand. From 2013 until 2017,

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rose steadily to a great

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of 2

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visitors

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. The total

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of tourists grew

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to 3.5

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visitors

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in 2017 from only 1

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in 2010.