The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The pie graph indicates the primary reasons that the production of farming
land
decreased,while
the accompanying table highlights land
degradation
across North America, Europe and Oceania
and how they were affected from 1990 to 2000.
Overall
, over-grazing, over-cultivation and deforestation were emerged
as three main elements with almost the same proportions that affected Change to the active voice
emerged
have emerged
land
loss. Additionally
, Europe and Oceania
were affected by these reasons the most and the least respectively.
Overgrazing was the primary reason for worldwide land
degradation
with 35% and was followed by over-cultivation which was in charge of nearly one-third of changes, deforestation (28%) and other unspecified factors accounted for the remaining 7%.
The greatest land
degradation
happened in Europe amounting to 23% of the overall
total and the main reason was deforestation with a rate of 9.8%. Moreover
, the second-largest land
degradation
took place in Oceania
at 13% and was susequently
followed by North America with only 5%. It is worth noting that over-cultivation had no role in degrading Correct your spelling
subsequently
land
in Oceania
, while
it was the main cause in North America.Submitted by fati.p98n on
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