The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land

becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three

regions of the world during the 1990s.
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The pie graph indicates the primary reasons that the production of farming
land
decreased,
while
the accompanying table highlights
land
degradation
across North America, Europe and
Oceania
and how they were affected from 1990 to 2000.
Overall
, over-grazing, over-cultivation and deforestation
were emerged
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as three main elements with almost the same proportions that affected
land
loss.
Additionally
, Europe and
Oceania
were affected by these reasons the most and the least respectively. Overgrazing was the primary reason for worldwide
land
degradation
with 35% and was followed by over-cultivation which was in charge of nearly one-third of changes, deforestation (28%) and other unspecified factors accounted for the remaining 7%. The greatest
land
degradation
happened in Europe amounting to 23% of the
overall
total and the main reason was deforestation with a rate of 9.8%.
Moreover
, the second-largest
land
degradation
took place in
Oceania
at 13% and was
susequently
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subsequently
followed by North America with only 5%. It is worth noting that over-cultivation had no role in degrading
land
in
Oceania
,
while
it was the main cause in North America.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words land, degradation, oceania with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural productivity
  • Deforestation
  • Over-cultivation
  • Overgrazing
  • Soil erosion
  • Nutrient depletion
  • Land degradation
  • Soil compaction
  • Fertility
  • Preventive measures
  • Sustainable farming practices
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic implications
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