The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summurise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart illustrates information about the average weekly spending by families in one country from 1968 to 2018.
Overall
, we can clearly see that household Linking Words
goods
were at the same point in both years Use synonyms
while
food was the largest increase, fuel and power and personal Linking Words
goods
were the lowest in 2018.
Getting back to details, food was at its highest point at 35% in 1968, Use synonyms
then
it increased sharply to about 18 per cent in 2018, housing was the opposite where people only spent 10% on it in 1968 Linking Words
then
it jumped to just under 20% meanwhile fuel and power were around six per cent in 1968 Linking Words
then
decreased a tiny fraction in 2018 clothing and footwear were one in ten in 1968 Linking Words
then
fell sharply to 5% in 2018.
Linking Words
Also
, personal Linking Words
goods
and transport were nearly 8% in 1968, After that personal Use synonyms
goods
declined quickly to about 4 per cent Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
the
transport rose to roughly 16%, Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
, spending on leisure was just under a tenth in 1968 Linking Words
then
upsurged to 23%.Linking Words
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