The maps show the changes that happened to an island called paradise.

The maps show the changes that happened to an island called paradise.
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The maps illustrate how Paradise Island has changed over time and how it looks now.
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, in the past, the island was designed for the research
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with some natural environment. Later, it underwent a total transformation to become an amazing metropolis. Regarding the previous chart, the island's northern and central regions had a few scattered trees. The scientific research station had been located next to the trees on the western side.
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, the northwest and northeast of the
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contained the beach, a natural spring, and rocks, respectively.
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, a pier with some boating facilities was observed to the west. The current map shows a transformation of land into a beautiful city, replacing the research station with a hotel complex and swimming pool. Trees were removed, and a restaurant
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constructed in the same
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. A BBQ
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and café
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built to the right of the restaurant, and a cycle path has been constructed within and around the city. Natural springs and rocks were left untouched, and a scenic spot developed near the rocks. The beach is now open for swimming, and the pier has been extended. A cruise ship replaces the earlier boat facility.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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