THE CHART SHOWS THE TOTAL DISTANCE TRAVELLED BY PASSENGERS ON FIVE TYPES OF TRANSPORT IN THE UK BETWEEN 1990 AND 2000.

THE CHART SHOWS THE TOTAL DISTANCE TRAVELLED BY PASSENGERS ON FIVE TYPES OF TRANSPORT IN THE UK BETWEEN 1990 AND 2000.
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bar chart illustrates the average distance of travelling passengers on five genres of
vehicle
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vehicles
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in the UK from 1990 to 2000.
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, it can be seen that there was a high
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in total over 10 years.
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, the
bus
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and
rail
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are far more visible in the five types of transport. Looking at the figures in detail, travellers reach 40
billion
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kilometers
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by
bus
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with approximately 35
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in
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rail
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during 1990. In the next 10 years, there was an increase in both transport
bus
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and
rail
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, travellers had moved more than 2
billion
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by
bus
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and
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rail way
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. Turning to the
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data, in 1990, the figures for
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bicycle
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bike
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bikes
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and air
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relatively low among these, bike had the highest number about 42 million
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bicycle
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bicycles
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nearly 4 million and under 2
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by air. In 2000, the kilometers of
bicycle
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bicycles
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and
bike
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bikes
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decreased
around
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1
billion
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and 2
billion
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perspectively
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bus, rail, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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