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The pie charts below show the percentage of students on the one adult education center taking a various courses offered in 1985 and this year

The pie charts below show the percentage of students on the one adult education center taking a various courses offered in 1985 and this year
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The given pie charts compare the proportion of pupils at an
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 academic institution joining a variety of courses between 1985 and the present.
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, the figure for fitness and dance remains unchanged over the period of time.
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, the sector of local history and music appreciation had been replaced by IT. In terms of the figure for modern language, it experienced a gradual decline from 24% to 17% which made it the predominant course among 6 different categories.
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, the proportion
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 art students witnessed a minor change
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 17% to 15%. Meanwhile, fitness and dance remained the same at 22% throughout the entire period. Turning to the remaining data, cookery experienced a growth from 14% to 19% during the period. At the same time frame, the figure for music appreciation and local history were abandoned to make way for IT which accounted for 27% in
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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