The pie charts below show the percentage of students on the one adult education center taking a various courses offered in 1985 and this year
The given pie charts compare the proportion of pupils at an
adults
academic institution joining a variety of courses between 1985 and the present.
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adult
Overall
, the figure for fitness and dance remains unchanged over the period of time. Linking Words
Additionally
, the sector of local history and music appreciation had been replaced by IT.
In terms of the figure for modern language, it experienced a gradual decline from 24% to 17% which made it the predominant course among 6 different categories. Linking Words
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for
art students witnessed a minor change Change preposition
of
within
17% to 15%. Meanwhile, fitness and dance remained the same at 22% throughout the entire period.
Turning to the remaining data, cookery experienced a growth from 14% to 19% during the period. At the same time frame, the figure for music appreciation and local history were abandoned to make way for IT which accounted for 27% in Change preposition
from
this
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