The table below shows the numbers of visitors to the Ashdown museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart show the result of a survey asking visitors how satisfied they are with their visit during the same two periods.

The table illustrates the volume of travellers visiting Ashdown Museum both pre and post refurbishments and the pie chart presents the proportion of tourist satisfaction during their visit.

Overall

,

it is clear that

people are interested in visiting the Ashdown Museum after a renovation.

Moreover

, the happiness of individuals rockets up more than before refurbishment.

To begin

with, the number of travellers was 74,000 during the year before renovation and it shot up to 92,000 after the redesignation was taken place. What is interesting to note is the total of citizens

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by approximately 20,000.

Additionally

, the fraction of visitors who were extremely satisfied with the Museum was at a nominal 30% before going up to 40% after the refurbishment.

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, the population

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, which was 15%,

also

escalated to a massive 35%. the percentage of no response remained at the same level, at 5%. What is surprising to see is the ratio of people who feel dissatisfied decreases by

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half.