The chart below gives information on the number of workers in different occupations who migrated to Australia between 2009 and 2012.

The chart below gives information on the number of workers in different occupations who migrated to Australia between 2009 and 2012.
The bar chart illustrates in detail the number of employees in four different jobs who moved to Australia between 2009 and 2012.
Overall
, Accountant was the highest over four years.
In contrast
, computer programming was the lowest over four years.
To begin
with, accountants stayed at 20 in 2009.
Then
it rocketed to 28
thousand
workers
in 2010. Next two years, it decreased quickly to 21
thousand
workers
.
Whereas
, computer programmers went up to 4 in
thousand
workers
. Next year, it went back to 2 in
thousand
workers
. In 2012, it jumped to 5 in
thousand
. Turning into detail, cook fell to 15 in
thousand
workers
in 2010. In 2011, It went to 18
thousand
workers
. Next year, It dropped to 16
thousand
workers
. Moving onto software engineering, It started at 19
thousand
workers
in 2009.
Then
it increased slightly to 21
thousand
workers
in 2011. In the next year, it dropped down to 17
thousand
workers
.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words thousand, workers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Migration patterns
  • Occupation categories
  • Significant growth
  • Labor shortages
  • Booming industries
  • Visa regulations
  • Job market saturation
  • Economic downturns
  • Skill shortages
  • Economic contribution
  • Infrastructure pressure
  • Technological advancements
  • Global economic predictions
  • Policy changes
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