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The table below provides statistics on several major metro(MRT) system aroun dthe world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below provides statistics on several major metro(MRT) system aroun dthe world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table chart illustrates statistics on some global major metro systems in six different countries that were completed in different years. Looking at the
overall
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 perspective, it is readily apparent that the MRT system in
London
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 has the longest distance,
while
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 the largest number of people are transported by the system in Tokyo.
Firstly
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, the country with the greatest total distance of the MRT system is
London
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, which was the oldest, completed in 1863.
London
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, whose figure stood at 1100km, has ten times that of Kyoto's entire length. It was followed by Paris which was half as much as that of
London
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 in 1890.
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, Tokyo and Washington DC were similar, with each having 149
km
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 and 114
km
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, completed in 1904 and 1921. In terms of their annual transport volume, Tokyo, the amount stood at 1434
million
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 in the early 1900s. Paris and
London
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 have lower shipping capacities, with the former being 850
million
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 and the latter being 548
million
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 in 1890 and 1863 respectively. A relatively low figure was observed in Kyoto with their length and capacity remaining at 11km and 11
million
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 respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words london, km, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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