The map below show the centre of a small called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate a small
center
of the city named Islip, and plans for its development. Change the spelling
centre
Overall
, it is clear that
the center
of the Islip will develop from Change the spelling
centre
small
, commercial Correct article usage
a small
center
to a larger commercial and tourist area.
The most notable development will be Change the spelling
centre
extended
Wrong verb form
extending
a
Correct article usage
the
road
to a dual carriageway which is a circular road
Correct pronoun usage
that goas
goas
around the city Correct your spelling
goes
center
, Change the spelling
centre
also
the main road
will be replaced by pedestrian's ways. There are many shops and the countryside in the north of the main road
will be demolished and replaced by a shopping center
, car park, bus station, and new housing, Change the spelling
centre
however
the shops in the south of the main Add a comma
however,
road
will remain.
The park in the soth
of the Correct your spelling
south
center
will remain but it will be smaller than before, and new housing will be constructed next to the park. Change the spelling
centre
Although
the southern part of the Islip will not see big changes and
Correct word choice
apply
school
will remain in the same place as it is.Fix the agreement mistake
schools
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Vocabulary: Replace the words center, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 3 times.
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