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The map below show the centre of a small called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below show the centre of a small called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate a small
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center
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centre
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 of the city named Islip, and plans for its development.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the
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center
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centre
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 of the Islip will develop from
small
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a small
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, commercial
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center
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centre
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 to a larger commercial and tourist area. The most notable development will be
extended
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extending
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a
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the
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road
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 to a dual carriageway which is a circular
road
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that goas
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goas
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goes
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 around the city
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center
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centre
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,
also
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 the main
road
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 will be replaced by pedestrian's ways. There are many shops and the countryside in the north of the main
road
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 will be demolished and replaced by a shopping
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center
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, car park, bus station, and new housing,
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however
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however,
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 the shops in the south of the main
road
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 will remain. The park in the
soth
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south
 of the
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center
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centre
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 will remain but it will be smaller than before, and new housing will be constructed next to the park.
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 the southern part of the Islip will not see big changes
and
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apply
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school
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schools
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 will remain in the same place as it is.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words center, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 3 times.
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