Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. However, it is longer the main form of transport. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of bicycle among the wider population?

At the present day, some

people

believe that the way to protect the

environment

more effectively is cycling. The writer of

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essay argues with

this

notion that it can reduce the carbon

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emissions

emission

as well as

save

financial

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economy. The main reason is that cycling can reduce

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gas

emission

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emissions

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form

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from

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the

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transportation.

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, there are a

lot

of negative impacts on gases

due to

the fact that

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can

bring

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harmful to the

environment

.

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, nowadays,

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humans due

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global warming because of

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transportation emit a

lot

of gases.

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, some

gases emission

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can cause air pollution

bring

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harmful to

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human

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so cycling is

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effective way to tackle

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this

problem. It is vital to understand that other reasons is cycling can save the financial economy. To put it simply,

bicycle

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bicycles

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spend less

money

than

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motorbikes

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and

car

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, it does not emit carbon dioxide and

occupy

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much space. Take

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is

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a typical country

for example

, the government encourage citizens

use

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bike

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bikes

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instead

of driving a

car

or motor to work to protect the

environment

so in some parking areas, some bikes are free or pay less than

car

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or other means of transport.

As a result

, Japan is one of the top countries which is having the highest rate of

people

’s awareness of saving

money

and protecting the

environment

. From my perspective, the effective way to encourage

people

widely use

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that the government can have some policies

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the benefits of using

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bicycles

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or organising some competitions

of

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racing

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bicycles

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that bring a

lot

of health and fun for

people

. Take some schools in Singapore

for instance

, a

lot

of primary schools teach children about how

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of health and fun that cycling

bring

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for

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.

Furthermore

, every

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, the government usually organise

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bike racing for

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people

who

passionate

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on

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about

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speed not only

make

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society connected and friendly but

also

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the

environment

. In conclusion,

people

can spend

money

on buying a bike

instead

of a

car

or a motorbike because of some benefits they bring,

include

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of more environmentally friendly than other means of transport by reducing

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gas

emission

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emissions

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as well as

saving

money

to make the country more beautiful and fresh.