You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The pie graph compares six different categories of electronic devices that young
people
use in Canada to watch TV
in the years 2009 and 2019. Overall
, at the beginning of the period, most of the young people
used conventional to watch their programmes as
Correct word choice
but
this
amount decreased over time. While
tablets were not popular in the past, the number of young people
using them, increased at the end
of the period.
In 2009, 34% of people
in the 18 to 25 age group used to watch TV
in the traditional way, whereas
the percentage dropped by 30%, in 2019. The second most popular way to watch TV
, in 2009, was using a laptop by 20% of young people
, which decreased slightly to 12% in 2019. In contrast
, 15% of young people
use flat-screen TVs to watch programmes on television, the number rose by almost 10% in 2019.
However
, in 2009, mobile phones and tablets were the least popular methods to watch TV
as 8% and 5% of young people
used them respectively. But, these figures rose significantly in 2019 to 27% for mobile phones and 26% for tablets. The amount of young people
watching TV
using desktop computers stayed relatively the same during the time period with onlya
5% difference.Correct your spelling
only a
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