the graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with the predictions for 2030 and 2040.

the graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with the predictions for 2030 and 2040.
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The given line graph illustrates how many people live in urban areas in four different nations in Asia between 1970 and 2040.
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it can be seen that all 4 nations had an upward trend in the population living in urban areas in the 70-year
period
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. It can
also
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be noted how Malaysia became the country which had the highest percentage of people living in urban by the end of the
period
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. Regarding the two nations which started at the highest proportion, the Philippines and Malaysia with over 30% and exactly 30% in 1970, respectively. In terms of
Philippines
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the Philippines
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, before reaching a peak at nearly 45%, it went up slightly to roughly 32%,
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after dipping to nearly 40% in the 20-year
period
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, it increased sharply to approximately 55% in 2040. In the meantime, the proportion of citizens in Malaysia gradually increased in the first 20 years of the
period
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,
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it increased significantly throughout the entire
period
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. Turning to the 2 countries started at the lowest proportion, Thailand and Indonesia. With regards to Thailand's citizens, it increased moderately by 20 years from lower than 20% to exactly 30% before fluctuating around 30% during the
period
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of 30 years. After that,
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number climbed to under 50%
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of the
period
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. Concurrently, Indonesia began at the lowest percentage (nearly 15%),
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experienced an increase throughout the provided
period
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and reached roughly 60% in the
last
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year of the timeframe
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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