the table shows the proportions of pupil attending four secondary school types
The given table illustrates the data about the attendance of students in the four secondary
school
variants.
Overall
, it is clear that
the only educational centre which had a noticeable increase is Voluntary- controlled academy, whereas
the other three had only a decrease.
Firstly
, in 2000, the top-ranked school
was Voluntary-controlled with 52%, in the meantime the lowest result was demonstrated by two schools: Specialist
and Correct article usage
a Specialist
Community
Correct article usage
a Community
school
which had an equal result of 12%. Nevertheless
, in 2005, public schools had a significant rise, while
Specialists went down slightly to 11%.
Secondly
, in 2005, the highest result was shown by Voluntary-controlled with 38%, meanwhile Community
had 32%. However
, in 2009, Community
Correct article usage
the Community
school
overtook that school
with a substantial improvement to 58%, while
that
academy had only 20% at that time.It is obvious that during the five Correct determiner usage
the
years
Voluntary-controlled Add a comma
years,
school
had Fix the agreement mistake
schools
a
best results, Change the article
the
nonetheless
in 2009, Community
took that first place.Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
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