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The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.

The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.
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Contained in the table is information pertaining to the surveyed quantity of domestic and foreign Australian
students
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 between 2001 and 2010,
while
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 the given pie charts depict the proportion of genders.
Overall
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, the
local
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number of local
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students
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 increased constantly
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 concurrently
accounted
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 for the majority of figures during the timeframe.
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, the gender distribution of both categories was fairly even across all
students
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 throughout. Looking at the table in
further
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 detail,in 2001, the number of local
students
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 was exactly 33,657 which was over six times higher than the international ones. During the period between 2001 and 2010, the domestic
students
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 witnessed a slightly mere increase from 33,657 to 39,488
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 the foreign
students
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 went up significantly, to around three times higher,
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, the total number rose gradually between nearly 39,000 and 54,000. Turning the focus towards the pie charts, in 2001, it can be seen that the local undergraduates accounted for 87% of the total number, with the gender distribution being almost identical. Meanwhile, the rate of non-local males and females constituted 4% and 9%, respectively. By 2010, the total percentage of local genders dominated at 73%
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 the women were 3% higher. In light of three per cent, it was
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 the rate of gender gap of international
students
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at the end
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 of the timeframe.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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