The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.
Contained in the table is information pertaining to the surveyed quantity of domestic and foreign Australian
students
between 2001 and 2010, while
the given pie charts depict the proportion of genders.
Overall
, the local
Correct quantifier usage
number of local
students
increased constantly while
concurrently accounted
for the majority of figures during the timeframe. Wrong verb form
accounting
Additionally
, the gender distribution of both categories was fairly even across all students
throughout.
Looking at the table in further
detail,in 2001, the number of local students
was exactly 33,657 which was over six times higher than the international ones. During the period between 2001 and 2010, the domestic students
witnessed a slightly mere increase from 33,657 to 39,488 whereas
the foreign students
went up significantly, to around three times higher, hence
, the total number rose gradually between nearly 39,000 and 54,000.
Turning the focus towards the pie charts, in 2001, it can be seen that the local undergraduates accounted for 87% of the total number, with the gender distribution being almost identical. Meanwhile, the rate of non-local males and females constituted 4% and 9%, respectively. By 2010, the total percentage of local genders dominated at 73% while
the women were 3% higher. In light of three per cent, it was also
the rate of gender gap of international students
at the end
of the timeframe.Submitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on
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