The table below shows the numbers of visitors to the Ashdown museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart show the result of a survey asking visitors how satisfied they are with their visit during the same two periods.
The provided table and pie charts illustrate the figures of participants to Ashdown Museum
coupled with
the rate of the satisfied
level of the same categories from the previous year until the following year.
Replace the word
satisfaction
Overall
, it can be seen that the number of people who visit and are entertained both see an upward trend while
people with no respond
remain unchanged. It is Replace the word
response
also
worth mentioning that after 1 year, there is a decrease in the attendance who have bad judgement with the museum.
With regards to the given table, the figure for people who participate in museum
Correct article usage
the museum
see
a moderate increase which is exactly 92000 from 74000
Turning onto the remaining Correct subject-verb agreement
sees
Correct your spelling
statistics
satistics
, visitors make a good judgement experience a rise to 35% and 40%Correct your spelling
statistics
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