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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below.
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The graph provides information about
wheat
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exports
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 from Australia,
Canada
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, and the
European
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Community
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 from 1985 to 1990. Generally speaking, the
exports
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 of
wheat
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 in Australia,
Canada
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, and the
European
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Community
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 did not change much in number in 1990 compared to 1985, but there were various trends in between. In detail, the export numbers of
wheat
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 at the beginning of the period were in the range of 15 to 20
million
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tonnes
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 in all areas, which did not show much difference in numbers. In
Canada
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 and the
European
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Community
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,
wheat
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exports
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 were steady at approximately 19 and 17
million
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tonnes
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, respectively, but
then
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 grew for the next two years. After that,
exports
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 in
Canada
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 suddenly dropped from a peak of 25
million
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tonnes
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 to 15
million
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tonnes
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. In the
last
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 year, sales increased again but only reached about 17
million
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tonnes
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. Unlike
Canada
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, the
European
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Community
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's
exports
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 consistently grew at a steady rate, reaching above 20
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990.
On the other hand
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, Australia’s
wheat
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exports
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initially
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 increased from 15
million
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tonnes
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 in 1985 to around 17
million
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tonnes
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 in 1986, but
then
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 gradually decreased to 12
million
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tonnes
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 by 1990.
Overall
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,
at the end
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 of the period, the
European
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Community
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 had the highest
wheat
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exports
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,
while
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 Australia had the lowest.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, exports, canada, european, community, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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