The charts show the main methods of transportation for people travelling to a university for work or study in 2004 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given pie charts illustrate

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various ways of transportation for

population

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the population

a population

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who tended to travel to a

university

for either work or study over a

five_year

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five-year

period. A glance at the graph reveals that travelling by

cars

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car

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was the most popular way to go to

university

in 2004,

comprised

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to 2009,the highest proportion of transportation for travelling was by Bus.

Moreover

,people did not choose to travel to

university

by train over the whole period. In 2004,just over

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half of

population

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the population

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was keen on

traveling

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travelling

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to

university

for working

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to work

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or studying by

cars

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car

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(%51),Making

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considerably more than movement by Bus(%33).Whilst,in 2009,46 per cent of principle

prefered

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preferred

to go to

university

by Bus,just ahead of people who tended to move by

cars

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car

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(%28).

In contrast

,transportation to

university

by foot was a bit as prominent as moving by train in both years 2004 and 2009.Surprisingly,the

proporation

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proportion

of people who chose to go to

university

by Bicycle for either doing

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the job

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or studying was %9 in 2004 and %16 in 2009,respectively.