The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011. You should write at least 150 words.
The table provides key information about the
number
of individuals from five world regions living in each other’s countries during 2011.
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Overall
, it can be seen that Britain and Germany were the two countries, which had the highest Linking Words
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of other nationalities. Use synonyms
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, Polish Linking Words
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of subjects living outside their country, Use synonyms
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Spanish individuals represented the lowest Linking Words
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what is shown, Germany had the highest Linking Words
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of foreign nationalities, at 1.198.000, the majority of them was Italian, at 556.000, and the minority was British, at 104.000. Use synonyms
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, the UK represented the second region for having other nationalities, at 1.037.000, the biggest Linking Words
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of them was Polish Use synonyms
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, at 550.000, and the lowest one was Spanish subjects.
In terms of Italy and Poland, both of them had the lowest Use synonyms
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of foreign individuals, at 196.000 and 6.000 respectively. In Italy, the Polish accounted for most foreign Use synonyms
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in Poland, the Dutch represented the majority of foreigners, at 4.400. Linking Words
Finally
, British Linking Words
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showed the highest Use synonyms
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of foreigners living in Spain, at 391.000 compared to others.Use synonyms
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