Some people believe that zoos have a positive impact on conservation efforts and education. Others argue that keeping animals in captivity is cruel and goes against their natural instincts. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Zoos

have

being

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part of human culture for a long time.

However

, its

existance

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existence

currently

divide

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opinions.

While

part of the public

defend

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defends

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that

zoos

are beneficial to

conserve

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conserving

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and

study

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different fauna

especies

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species

, others believe that keeping

animals

confined and away from their natural ecosystem is an act of cruelty. In my opinion,

animals

should

leave

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live

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in their natural habitats rather than in captivity, so

zoos

should be extinct. One of the most common leisure activities in many cultures

world-wide

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worldwide

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is visiting

zoos

to learn about different

animals

or for the sake of pure

entreintement

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entertainment

. It is

also

a common school excursion for students to learn more about science

as well as

different species and their

biomas

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biomass

biomes

. When visiting

zoos

,

for example

, children can observe wild

animals

and some

their

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particular behaviours, consolidating theories learned in class throughout a lived experience.

Furthermore

, some of these establishments work on the conservation and rehabilitation of endangered creatures, which

bring

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a positive factor to

zoos

and brings people in their

defense

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defence

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.

On the other hand

, living in

zoos

can be

a

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extremelly

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extremely

stressful experience for

animals

simply because it is not their natural habitat. Species

such

as lions and monkeys are

naturals

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natural

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from forests and are used to live in open territories.

However

, they can be found in almost every zoo around the globe.

Furthermore

, too many visitors and a limited jail space add extra layers of harm

for

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these innocent creatures.

This

ends up being an act of cruelty against

animals

.

Thus

,

Iin

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In

my view,

zoos

should be

prohibeted

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prohibited

or

being

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closed to the public, focusing only

in

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on

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wildlife conservation, and recovery.

Also

, students can learn by watching videos online, rather than visiting

zoos

. In conclusion, even

tought

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though

zoos

are an

entreitaning

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entertaining

activity,

a

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great opportunity for learning and conserving species, in my opinion, they should no longer exist or become

a

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animal conversation centre only.

This

is because it promotes animal cruelty when keeping creatures in jail or being observed for numerous passerbyes per day.