The table below shows the numbers of visitors to the Ashdown museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart shows the results of a survey asking visitors how satisfied they are with their visit during the same two periods.
The percentage of visitors to the Ashdown Museum between the years before and after its modification based on the findings of customer satisfaction surveys is depicted in the two pie charts provided.
The general overview here is that, over the period, year after refurbishment, there was the most satisfaction before refurbishment.
The data indicated that in the feeling group of the year before the update, the percentages of respondents who were dissatisfied, very dissatisfied, satisfied, and did not respond were 30, 15, 10, and 5 per cent. It was important to note
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