Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?
Plastic
things
such
as plastic
bags, plastic
bottles
, and plastic
packaging are harmful for
the environment. Change the preposition
to
Also
, this
trend has many negative effects, but there are some effective solutions that can be adopted for
solve Change preposition
to
this
problem.
There are many damages of
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to
this
issue. To begin
with, plastic
things
cannot disappear for a long time, and this
is a bad phenomenon for the environment. Simply put, every plastic
needs almost 100 years for disappearing
, and when people leave them in nature, it makes pollution for the land. A good illustration is that when people go Change preposition
to disappear
for
camping or picnic and leave their plastics and garbage in Change preposition
apply
jungle
, the ground after several years will lose its ability Add an article
the jungle
for growing
new grasses or trees. Change preposition
to grow
Also
, animals might damage
because of eating these plastics and garbage. Wrong verb form
be damaged
Furthermore
, plastic
things
like plastic
bottles
are so harmful for
Change the preposition
to
sea
creatures when individuals leave them in the sea
and they make
Verb problem
cause
sea
pollution for fishes
and humans.
For these problems, there are some effective solutions. First of all, governments should set some rules and policies about keeping Fix the agreement mistake
fish
environment
safe and clean. Add an article
the environment
In other words
, in natures
or Fix the agreement mistake
nature
in
Change preposition
on
the
beaches, they can set several signs for showing forbidden Correct article usage
apply
behaviors
, and Change the spelling
behaviours
also
they can provide many bins in random places on
these areas. A good example is that in New Zealand Change preposition
in
at
Change preposition
apply
sea
areas, there are many false signs for forbidden behaviors
, like “you should keep your garbage with yourself and throw them out outside of the Change the spelling
behaviours
sea
areas”. Moreover
, individuals should care about Correct article usage
the environments
environments
and animals. They can use cotton bags and packaging for daily Fix the agreement mistake
environment
works
and Fix the agreement mistake
work
replacing
Wrong verb form
replace
plastic
bottles
instead
of, sorry, replacing, oh no, and recycling bottles
instead
of plastic
ones.
By way of conclusion, considering the points discussed above, this
trend has many false dangers for creatures and environments, such
as poisoning the land and animals by through out
Correct your spelling
throughout
plastic
things
in nature and many types of pollution for ground and human life. But we can handle these problems by implementing solutions, include
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including
set
rules and policies for keeping nature clean and safe, and replacing cotton bags and packaging with Wrong verb form
setting
plastic
ones.Submitted by tahani.nr on
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language
Ensure grammatical accuracy and fluency. Consider revising sentences to avoid abrupt changes or repetition. For instance, 'replacing plastic bottles instead of, sorry, replacing, oh no, and recycling bottles instead of plastic ones.'
clarity
Clarify arguments and avoid ambiguity. The sentence 'animals might damage because of eating these plastics and garbage' should specify 'animals might suffer damage or health issues because of ingesting these plastics and garbage.'
structure
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evidence
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conclusion
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structure
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