Some people think visual images (e.g. photographs videos) in a news story can accurately tell what happened. Others think it cannot tell the full news story. Discuss both and give your own opinion.

Visual techniques can be tapped into spreading
information
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nowadays. In my opinion,
although
it may yield some benefits to transferring
news
, I do not consider it can describe the content of
news
comprehensively. To commence, there are several positive impacts by drawing upon the visual images.
First,
it could enhance the
standatd
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standard
of individuals' understanding when
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with some unfamiliar affairs, because it enables
people
to see the situation where things happened.
For example
, some
news
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wars happened far away from citizens' local country, which means without visual tools, they are unlikely to comprehend the geographic location.
Therefore
, by visualizing these texts, individuals are prone to gain a deeper insight
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the
news
. Meanwhile, some
information
related to
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expression
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can be reflected more efficiently in videos.
This
is because the degree of emotions
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less likely to
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precisely by words, which means it takes a
while
for
people
to digest them and readers tend to misunderstand the true meanings.
By contrast
, those drawbacks can be tackled by photographing
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characters'
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so that
people
can catch their moods quickly and easily.
On the other hand
,
information
can not be conveyed by visual techniques only. In the first place, photographs and videos can be edited, resulting
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people'
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attitudes to the
news
. Many
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tend to earn more clicks by cutting the videos of one certain affair,
while
individuals are likely to believe what they see.
Consequently
,
people
may have the wrong
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judgements
judgments
about
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news
, arousing more
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bewteen
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between
two opposite
view holders
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viewholders
.
Additionally
, visual images fail to transfer
information
in a fair way because
photographes
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photographers
photographs
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creators'
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already.
Due to the
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photographers
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manners
such
as lights, angles and positions affect the outcome of the
news
significantly.
For example
, the
appearence
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appearance
of
people
can be different from the various filming positions, conveying different meanings for audiences. From my perspective,
although
visual tools can sometimes help
people
to
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grasp the meaning of
news
efficiently, they can not transfer the
information
in a just way.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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