The graph below shows the global demand for different textile fibres between 1980 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the international request for 4 textile fibres from 1980 to 2015.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that, while
wool had been showing a downward trend throughout the period, polyester, cotton, cellulosic and wool witnessed an upward trend for 5 years.
It is interesting to note that, polyester experienced a sharp jump from around 5 million
tons to roughly 67 million
. It began at 5 million
, and it increased gradually from 1980 to 1990. Then
, it soared by approximately 46 million
tons between 1990 and 2015. In contrast
, cotton had the highest rate at the beginning of the period, but there was a fluctuation during a period of 35 years. It started at almost 12 million
and ended up at nearly 32 million
.
On the other hand
, cellulosic fell slightly and then
quickly recovered. It was around 3 million
tons in 1980, and then
it suffered a drop in 2000. Subsequently
, it saw a slight increase from 2000 to 2015 ,
and finished at 9 Remove the comma
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million
. Additionally
, wool was the fibre, which finished under its beginning. It started around 1, then
slowly increased by approximately 4 million
. Finally
, it declined to 1 and remained flat.Submitted by hsmkashi on
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