The graph below shows the global demand for different textile fibres between 1980 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the international request for 4 textile fibres from 1980 to 2015.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that, Linking Words
while
wool had been showing a downward trend throughout the period, polyester, cotton, cellulosic and wool witnessed an upward trend for 5 years.
It is interesting to note that, polyester experienced a sharp jump from around 5 Linking Words
million
tons to roughly 67 Use synonyms
million
. It began at 5 Use synonyms
million
, and it increased gradually from 1980 to 1990. Use synonyms
Then
, it soared by approximately 46 Linking Words
million
tons between 1990 and 2015. Use synonyms
In contrast
, cotton had the highest rate at the beginning of the period, but there was a fluctuation during a period of 35 years. It started at almost 12 Linking Words
million
and ended up at nearly 32 Use synonyms
million
.
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On the other hand
, cellulosic fell slightly and Linking Words
then
quickly recovered. It was around 3 Linking Words
million
tons in 1980, and Use synonyms
then
it suffered a drop in 2000. Linking Words
Subsequently
, it saw a slight increase from 2000 to 2015 Linking Words
,
and finished at 9 Remove the comma
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million
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, wool was the fibre, which finished under its beginning. It started around 1, Linking Words
then
slowly increased by approximately 4 Linking Words
million
. Use synonyms
Finally
, it declined to 1 and remained flat.Linking Words
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