The charts below show the numbers of people per household in 1990 and 2000 in New Zealand.

The charts below show the numbers of people per household in 1990 and 2000 in New Zealand.
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The pie chart illustrates the number of
people
per
household
in the range from 1 to 6 in 1990 and 2000 in New Zealand.
Overall
, it is evident that, in 1990, the top
three
family structures were single,
couples
, and
three
people
while
the top
three
after 20
years
contain
couples
,
three
people
, and four
people
in the
household
.
According to
the data, there is a similarity that
couples
and
three
-person households are the most popular family structure in both
years
. The ratio of
three
people
in the
household
increased from 21% to 35% over 10
years
,
while
the proportion of
couples
remained constant at 31%. It is noteworthy that the ratio of more than 4
people
household
decreased over 10
years
, which had gaps at 1%, 5%, and 3%, respectively.
On the other hand
, the proportion of single-family decreased dramatically from 17% to 2%
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