The pie chart below shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.

The pie chart below shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.
The provided pie charts show the percentage of various
revenue
and spending streams for a US
charity
over the course of a year.
Overall
, food donations accounted for the largest portion of
revenue
sources
while
program services
accounting
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for the majority of the
charity
's expenditures. Returning to the specifics, the first pie chart displays the
charity
revenue
from six sources. Food donations accounted for 86.6% of total
revenue
, or the majority of the proceeds. It was followed by donations from the community (just over 10%) and program revenues which made up just 2.2% of the
charity
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charity's
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annual earnings. At 0.2% of total income, government grants and investment income were the
charity
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charity's
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least profitable sources. The second graph illustrates how the
charity
used its funds. It is noteworthy that the
children
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children's
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charity
organization spent almost 95% of its
revenue
to
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on
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program services.
Then
came fund-raising activities, which required 2.6% of the total, and management and general purposes, which accounted for the least amount of the money (1.6%).
Additionally
, the
charity
saved little over $330,000
this
year with a total expenditure of $53,224,896 and a total receiving fund of $53, 561,580 over the course of a year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words revenue, charity with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie chart
  • charity
  • non-profit organization
  • funds
  • revenue
  • donations
  • grants
  • fundraising
  • expenditure
  • allocations
  • administrative costs
  • program services
  • beneficiaries
  • financial year
  • breakdown
  • percentage
  • portion
  • sector
  • philanthropy
  • budgeting
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