THE LINE GRAPH SHOWS THE ADVERAGE NUMBER OF WEEKLY PATIENTS VISITING FOUR CLINICS OF A HOSPITAL FROM 2010 TO 2016.
The given line graph illustrates the
amount
of patients each week Change the quantifier
number
went
to four different Correct pronoun usage
who went
hospital
between 2010 to 2016.
Change to a plural noun
hospitals
Overall
, it can be seen that birth control had the highest and in contrast
to it was the birth control with the lowest. The two others show the adverage
number.
Looking at the figures in detail, we can see that in the first year birth control was on the top at nearly 250 Correct your spelling
average
then
it had a steady rise in the next 2 years at 270. After that
it went down to 180 in 2014 and went up to 240 in 2016. At the same time, in 2010 Add a comma
that,
diabetic
stood at 60 and from 2010 to 2014 there was a noticeable Replace the word
diabetes
climbing
Replace the word
climb
at
nearly 90 Change preposition
to
then
in the next 2 years it jumped up to 135.
Turning to the remaining, dental accounted for 100 in 2010 then
decreased at
50 in 2012. Change preposition
to
However
, in 2014 it rised
to 125 and continued to increase to 130. The eye had Correct your spelling
raised
rose
medium
number at 125 Add an article
the medium
a medium
then
in 2012 it jumped up to 150. Over the last
4 years, it continuously reached a
highest top at 300.Change the article
the
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "jumped" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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