THE LINE GRAPH SHOWS THE ADVERAGE NUMBER OF WEEKLY PATIENTS VISITING FOUR CLINICS OF A HOSPITAL FROM 2010 TO 2016.

The given line graph illustrates the

amount

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of patients each week

went

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to four different

hospital

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between 2010 to 2016.

Overall

, it can be seen that birth control had the highest and

in contrast

to it was the birth control with the lowest. The two others show the

adverage

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average

number. Looking at the figures in detail, we can see that in the first year birth control was on the top at nearly 250

then

it had a steady rise in the next 2 years at 270. After

that

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it went down to 180 in 2014 and went up to 240 in 2016. At the same time, in 2010

diabetic

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stood at 60 and from 2010 to 2014 there was a noticeable

climbing

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at

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nearly 90

then

in the next 2 years it jumped up to 135. Turning to the remaining, dental accounted for 100 in 2010

then

decreased

at

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50 in 2012.

However

, in 2014 it

rised

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raised

rose

to 125 and continued to increase to 130. The eye had

medium

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number at 125

then

in 2012 it jumped up to 150. Over the

last

4 years, it continuously reached

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highest top at 300.