The diagram shows the lifecyle of salmon fish

The diagram shows the lifecyle of salmon fish
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram shows the lifecyle of salmon fish
The flow chart represents the development of a fish species called
salmon
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during its life
cycle
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.
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, it is obvious that there are three distinct stages illustrated in the process commencing with laying
eggs
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in the upper
river
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and culminating with the development of an adult
salmon
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. The first stage is when
eggs
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are laid on the gravel hiding among reeds and small stones in the slow-moving upper
river
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. After four months, these
eggs
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hatch and small fries whose length is between 3-4 cm emerge. At
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point in the
cycle
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, these fries will live in the lower fast-flowing
river
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for the next four years. Over time the small become bigger reaching 12 to 15 cm and at
this
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stage, they are called smolt. At
this
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period, they migrate from the lower
river
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to the open sea. After five years, these smolts will grow to become adult
salmon
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which measure between 70 to 76 cm.The final stage of
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cycle
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is when the adult
salmon
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start to swim back to their birthplace to lay their
eggs
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. Having completed all these steps, the life
cycle
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will
then
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begin again.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, cycle, eggs, river with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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