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The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main deatures, and make comparisions where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.

The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main deatures, and make comparisions where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.
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It is believed that technology development and software improvement permit users to transfer between
languages
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 automatically which makes it not important to study foreign
languages
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 anymore. The writer of
this
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 essay is in agreement with the notion of communicating with
foreigners
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 quickly
along with
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 reliability concerns. The current issue is that it takes
people
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 who use foreign
languages
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such
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 as English to communicate with each other efficiently and conveniently. To put it simply,
people
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 can talk with
foreigners
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 in an efficient way if they know how to use a foreign language.
By contrast
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, if
people
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 rely on using translation apps
such
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 as Google Translate or Oxford Dictionary to translate speech, they will find it difficult to converse with others because of slow answers.
For example
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, Vietnamese students have to study the English language in order to make teenagers talk with
foreigners
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 easily
instead
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 of using translating media. Another core reason is how it is necessary for reliability concerns.
In other words
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, many translation apps on the Internet sometimes have many errors in interpreting abroad
languages
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.
Furthermore
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, many bad manners have a lot of tools and tricks to change the meaning of a foreign language into a negative meaning.
As a result
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,
people
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 will misapprehend when they talk with each other which can cause arguments and make relationships worse. In conclusion, by talking with
foreigners
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 conveniently and efficiently
as well as
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 having reliability concerns,
people
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 should not rely much on technology and software to put the way for
transliterating
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 foreign
languages
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.
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