The chart below shows the average cost of monthly contract for four diﬀerent mobile (cell phones) in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euro.

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The line graph demonstrates the number of money contracts in four varied cell phones after 9 months since January in a country in Europe. In general,

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, Lex and Alpha increased the value in research substantially

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Sim TX decreased slightly.

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, Alpha had the lowest price at first

then

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significantly increased to the highest rate

at the end

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of the period. Looking at the figures in

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detail,

it is clear that

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's expenses went up to approximately 23 euros from 1

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in January to September.

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, there was a rise to just over 15

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in September after starting at 13

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in January. Turning to

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and Sim TX, the disparities were big

at the end

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of the timetable. Regarding

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, which had the lowest expense before significantly reaching the peak at 25 euros from Jun to September.

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, Sim TX slowly rose up to 15 euros in Jun before dropping to the lowest cost

at the end

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just under 10

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euro

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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167 words

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The chart below shows the average cost of monthly contract for four diﬀerent mobile (cell phones) in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euro.

Should long-term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community?

In the past，many people had skills such as making their own clothes and doing repair to things in the house. In many countries, nowadays, skills like these are disappearing. Why do you think this change is happening? how far is this situation true in your county?

Both men and woman care more about their appearance today than they did in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

97.In many countries, the amount of waste produced by households and industries is increasing at an alarming rate. What are the main causes of this situation, and what measures could be taken to tackle the problem?

Directors of large organizations receive much higher salaries than ordinary workers. Some think it is necessary while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.