The chart below shows the average cost of monthly contract for four different mobile (cell phones) in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euro.

The chart below shows the average cost of monthly contract for four different mobile (cell phones) in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euro.
The line graph demonstrates the number of money contracts in four varied cell phones after 9 months since January in a country in Europe. In general,
Domo
, Lex and Alpha increased the value in research substantially
whereas
Sim TX decreased slightly.
Moreover
, Alpha had the lowest price at first
then
significantly increased to the highest rate
at the end
of the period. Looking at the figures in
further
detail,
it is clear that
Domo
's expenses went up to approximately 23 euros from 1
euro
in January to September.
Similarly
, there was a rise to just over 15
euro
in September after starting at 13
euro
in January. Turning to
Domo
and Sim TX, the disparities were big
at the end
of the timetable. Regarding
Domo
, which had the lowest expense before significantly reaching the peak at 25 euros from Jun to September.
In contrast
, Sim TX slowly rose up to 15 euros in Jun before dropping to the lowest cost
at the end
just under 10
euro
Fix the agreement mistake
euros
show examples
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