The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).
The following table represents the changes
of
travellers Change preposition
in
travelled
overseas to five different regions: Africa, Correct pronoun usage
who travelled
America
, Asia and the pacific
, Europe, and Capitalize word
Pacific
Middle
Correct article usage
the Middle
east
, in 1990, 1995, 2000, and 2005, Capitalize word
East
indicated in
Wrong verb form
indicating
million
Fix the agreement mistake
millions
Change preposition
of peoples
peoples
.
Fix the agreement mistake
people
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that Europe was most
popular destination, Correct article usage
the most
whereas
Middle
East was preferred the least. Correct article usage
the Middle
However
, it is interesting to note that the trend of commuters travel
internationally was rising throughout the given time frame except Wrong verb form
travelling
the
Change preposition
in the
states
.
Capitalize word
States
To begin
with, in 1990, at 280.2 million
peoples
was the highest number of Fix the agreement mistake
people
peoples
among the other four continents, followed by Fix the agreement mistake
people
America
, Asia, Africa, and Middle
East, at 80.5, at 60.2, at 18.2, at 9.8 Correct article usage
the Middle
million
peoples
, respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
people
Moreover
, similar trends happened the same in the next decades with the rise of minimum
Correct article usage
a minimum
2
-6 Change preposition
of 2
million
peopls
found in Africa and Correct your spelling
people
Middle
East. Whilst that of in Correct article usage
the Middle
America
and Asia increased 20-30 million
persons, the number of people travel
to Europe is roughly 9 times that of the aforementioned area.
In regards Correct pronoun usage
who travel
with
, in 2000 and in 2005, Change preposition
to
America
reached its peak in 2000 at 118.2 million
peoples
before slightly Fix the agreement mistake
people
dropped
to 113.2 in the next five years. Wrong verb form
dropping
Therefore
, the rest of the area skyrocketed to its maximum figures.Submitted by kamonluck1999 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words america, middle, million, peoples with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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