The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and prediction for future years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph reveals how many

people

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moved to the cities from the countryside in three countries including countries A, B, and C from 2000 and the predicted trends until 2025.

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, it is obvious that most countries saw an upward trend over the given period. What stands out is that the least number of migrants was seen in

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B, compared to the other nations.

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with, by the turn of the twenty-first century,

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A started with the most travellers, at around 15

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people

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this

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nation experienced a significant increase and

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climbing trend is predicted to continue (reaching more than 85

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migrants in 2025).

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C, with a slow start, saw a dramatic rise from 2005 and surpassed

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A’s figures after 2020.

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country

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is predicted to see the most number of

people

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who move to the urban areas in the next years.

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B bucks the trend somewhat.

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country

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started with approximately 15

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travellers.

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figure grew steadily and

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reached a peak of 30

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people

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. It is predicted that

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number will level off in the next few years.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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